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Unread 03/07/2001, 06:22 AM   #2
rshimek
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Hi Monty,

It looks pretty good. Might want to read over it to improve clarity a bit, there are couple of places where the sentences need a subject or verb, some of those funny things English teachers get picky about.

All-in-all it is a good set of directions. I liked the reminders about that uncommon material, common sense.

Also, I liked the emphasis on planning ahead. Some people may benefit from sitting down before the whole process and figuring out how they want to arrange their rocks, etc.

You also might want to emphasize that the floor around the tank is going to get wet, so that perhaps some towels go down on it to soak up water and to provide traction.

A good worthy effort!!!


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